Hello Again!
My apologies for posting the topic today. This week we are going to be a little bit more personal. I would like you to write about someone or something that has had a big influence in your life. You need to give reasons why this person/situation is/was so important for you.
Try to apply what we learned in class regarding the paragraph (remember the oreo, and the hamburger). You are expected to write 1-2 paragraphs.
If you have any question just let me know.
Have a great week!
Prof. Eva
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Hi proffesor and classmates.
The most influential person in my life.
An influential person is that people motivate you to be a best person everyday; she/he is your north and your south, she/he is like you star. In my case, the most influential person in my life is my daughter Virginia del Carmen. I’m going to focus my point of view in two aspects: My life before her and my life after her.
Firstly, I’m going to talk about my life before her. I was a normal person; I assisted to my school in the morning. In the afternoon, I assisted to an English course and also play clarinet in the music band of my school. My life was monotonic. Everyday the same. For these reasons, I found that when I had a free time, I had to finish with everybody and try to find some funny to do. When I met to Abraham (daughter’s dad), I felt he was the person that I needed in my boring life. I remember he promised me the sky and starts, he talked me everything had to be different, I believed in him, he taught me many things, but I had to pay a high cost for my incredulity. When I knew that I was pregnant, I felt the sky felt down on me… I though he helped me to overcome the consequences of my acts, but no, I’m wrong. He went out when he knew the notice, I stayed along. My family supported me but I needed his support. I thought the world had finished for me, therefore, it arrived me a moment in which I’m so depressed that I thought finishing with my life. In this moment, I discovered some wonderful. My baby moved in my belly so I found the reason for living: Virginia Del Carmen.
My life after Virginia Del Carmen begins when I accepted my reality. I was pregnant and would bring a baby to this world. So if I wanted to bring a healthy baby to this world, I had to care me physically and mentally. Now, I had a reason for changing my life. While she stayed in my belly, I tried to be a balanced person. When she was born, I always said that was the best moment of all my life. At last, she was born. Now, I had with me, I saw her and I cannot believe that she had left of me. Since the first moment that I saw her, I felt a change in my life. It already had passed two years since she was born, and each day I fall in love of her. She’s my motivation, the reason why I’m in two universities breaking all the obstacles that I find in my way; for her, I fight against all for getting my goals and dreams, because she values it.
Each day, I pray God give me the strength that I need to get to the top, of this form give her everything she deserves. I love her, she is the most influential person in my life because thanks to her, I found a reason for living…
Hello everybody I loved this item.
There are many important things in my life and one of them is that it has been influenced or rather motivated by very special people who have made a huge difference in my life.
God is the first thing I should mention because he is my guide and who gives me the wisdom that I need every day so I put myself in his hands every morning waiting to fulfill its mission.
Second place for my family especially my parents who for knowing myself, I thank you for guiding and educating the best way in my achieving a responsible person, with a view to a great future.
Finally for these reasons and many more people I mentioned above have influenced my life in a positive way.
See you the next class....
Hello I consider this a Little bit personal but it is ok. My children are everything in my life I almost feel asphyxia, with his love and sweetness ha ha ha I´m kidding, they push me to continue when I feel down (they see the difference between happy and playful mom to unplugged mom; and start to make too many questions, oh God!). Nevertheless there is another person who has the power of inspiration for me; she is a very kind person,very girlish, smart, beautiful, playful, and some times a little bit stubborn; but always has a sparkling smile, even in bad times.
She doesn´t know and probably because she is like that, she doesn´t try to encourage me that´s her attitude, a winner attitude, all the time she is helping, if she fail just bit up that moment and keep trying to get hers goals. This wonderful person was sick almost per a 3 month and never give up I just feel powerless when she was in that situation and always she says “don´t worry I am ok this is just for a moment…” and she was unable to move her arms. Well thank Good She is giving us all her charms… she is my dear sister Jinan Jesabel. I love you sist.:-D
Hi everybody:
This topic is very important for me, it´s my inspiration.
When I had betwen seven and eighteen years old I studied as a obligation that I had to with my parents, but when I started to work all changed. Why? Because I started to value more the things that my parents had been for me, to that I can study and be a profesional person in the life also I started to see the things of other way because started to pay all my things.
I always wanted to be someome in the life and I´m very gratitude with the influential person in my life that is my mother.
Other important and influential person for me, that is the reason to life is my beatiful son: Daniel Eduardo Ramos, this baby is my inspiration to getting alls my dreams in the life; I have that working everyday and very hard to that my son have a exellent future.
My son and my mothet are the more wonderful and influential person that I had been in my great life.
My God and they always are the inspiration to continue.
Have a exellent afternoon, bye
hi everybody,people that most influenced in my life are my sisters and my parents, they´re the most important that i have, because i can trust them fully. i enjoy all moments with them. so about my studies i can´t be with them every day,that hurts! but I have three reasons why they are the ones I love most in this life. my parents have given me everything, my sisters are the ones that have made me happy in my childhood and now, when I have problems is in my family that I can trust. I hope all of you have very good relationship with your family always... see you
hello professor, the person who most influenced me in my life is my mom, she's always wants the best for me, it motivates me to get on, never give up in looking forward for more obstacles that she was never surrendered, never stopped study and today is the person I most admire, she always taught me that the study is the future of tomorrow, while a further study, have more opportunities in life. His vision is that I succeed in my life and not make it if not for her. Now I'm going to follow suit. She is a great person and when the day of my graduation, I will be someone by my dear mom.
hi everybody!
the person who has had a great influence on my life has been God, because He exists and it is he who guides us every day and helps us be better people.
second my family who have been the people that have most influenced in my life and my. they have taught me values , they have taught me to be a good person and above all to fight for what I want regardless of the obstacles.
my friends also have been people of great influence to me because I give me good advice and help me when I need them.
Hi everybody well the person that has a strong influence in my life is mu Dad.
I always see my father like a symbol of endeavor may you are thinking in the reason:
the first reason that I consider to my father is because he always make his best effort for gets all that his family need; I remember when I was little that my daddy came two days in two or three months because he worked as teacher so far in Buenos Aires from las Palmas but when hw came with us he brought everything that we needed as my mom, my brothers and I.
On the other hand when my father worked my mom took care of my and my brothers but whe he was moving to another school more near than the other he helped tomy mom in the school because she can't studied but he brought all the resourse that she needed at schoolas result my mom is a professor in Rodolfo Chiari in Aguadulce.Besides he always consider that the key of succeed is the studyand consent that his children will have all that his parents never brought him but importan things for example one of my brother is studying Geology in Cezch Republic, the other is professor and I'm a teacher the point of everything is that my daddy told me that we study for us not for him because he has all that he wanted and is time for us get all our goals as a professional person.
Those are my reason specially that Iam studying In the best Universty in Panama. I'm really glad with my dad for all that he helps me and bring me in my life specially his love as a father.
"THANK'S Daddy" :)
Hello! teacher and dear partners
well I feel very proud for have good friendship thath help me to become a good person.
The people that has had a strong influence in my life, is my baby boy because since he born I've began to take more serius my life.
Because now, I got a new responsability, after that get a good job to support him and finally be a special father giving to him a good advise for to become a profesional people in a near futuro.
Well after all, my baby boy is the person most influent in my life because he is filled my whole life because since he born, I don't feel alone anymore.
hello .. have influence in my life!
well the truth I have to admit that there are people who are my inspiration and influence in a very special to me: first my parents, my family second and third my girlfriend.
which is what I mean, for me my parents are the most wonderful beings in the world had already been instilled in me a person with a future and goals for tomorrow.
the importance of my family who helped me get through and see the reality of life in which we live to be a good man and a good professional probecho.
I can not mention my girlfriend as it is the major inspiration for me as it is a professional and want to be like her, reaching my goals for a good future.
with all these special inspiration for me as my family, parents and my girlfriend, I have no reason to stop and no way to leave than to educate and prepare for tomorrow.
Hello proffesor Eva Ramos and classmates!! I miss they.
Yes, There have been a strong influence in my long life. The first person that influenced in my life was my dad, because He’s made me the kind of person I am. This is important to me. Because I learned to work hard in my family's farm and it’s a skill that has served me well. As now I am "man of the house." I have the responsibility to care for cattle. Because I live with my mom and my sister and they do not have the same force as me. My dad was very strict because it was militate. He was a good dad!! I love Dad.
The other person of course is my Mom!!
She taught me how to find sense of things. If I was bored, she was almost always able to find something creative and fun to do. I remember when my brother and I always found Christmas presents." I also remember when I broke his nose playing soccer. My mom almost died. I watched her struggles through of life, and watched change its role from mother to father, She taught me that a mistake is not obstacle to overcome.
My Grandma Mamanena was a special influence in my life, as grandmothers should be. She taught me that there is a precious joy in making someone else happy. She always helps me with girlfriends.
My best friend Carla has taught me humility. I used to get so wrapped up in trying to be a million places at once. I try not to take people for granted anymore, and appreciate more of the little things in life. She is my friend unconditionally because you're always there and not get tired of listening. she will always be with me because he promised to always be by my side.
I’m so grateful for them and the lessons they taught me. Thanks to them I am a better person.
Hi, professor and frends.
well, I understand that everyone has been influenced by a love one, to me the person more influential was my mother because, she was the person most important in my lifeand she was very inteligent because she can educate nine sons and right now,we are a good peoples, also she was very believer in God and the Mary virgin,she taught me that the family always comes first and that the man is wrong, but the most important is to recognize your mistakes and ask forgiveness furthermore she said again and again tat the best of persons is her/his humility although she isn't here to me it is my belief her influences were wonderful.
By the same taken, that my mother had been influenced in my life , I want will have in my sons because they are the persons with major importance in my live, reasonable for this values I want that you ,to your family and especially your mother.
Hello
Well i've been through many rough situations in my life, bad decisions, good ones too, i gotta admit that i have some regrets but i also have some good memories...and something that notice just recently I mean like maybe two years when I finally decided to grow ;) jeje... Is that my grandmother (the one who raised me and gave me everything in this world)was there for me all those years after everything... That just makes me think that when a person becomes a mother, everything changes just like magic. I was reading virginia's comment and It was just beautiful. So.. Based on my own experience as a daughter and as a viewer of this magnificent world I consider that the most influential thing i have ever see is motherhood.. personally I'm just can't wait to experience this... And I know that all those women that have been through this would not change it for anything. It's always beautiful to see the conection of mother with her child, and i don't know about you, but i have heard about the wonders that a mother can do when her child is in danger. Been a mother is just a blessing, we should be thankful of that, bcuz it is a privilege to give the gift of life.
See you guys this weekend :)
HI EVERYBODY
WELL TO START THAT PERSON WHO INFLUENCE IN MY LIFE WILL BE MY DAUGHTER ASHLEIGH YAELI SANJUR.
SINCE I KNEW THAT I WAS PREGNANT A NEW STYLE OF LIFE BEGGINS, SO I TOOK ALL THE CARES FOR MY BABY.
AS SHE WAS GROWING IN MY BELLY NEW EXPERIENCES CAME TO MY LIFE .IT´S SO WONDERFULL TO IMAGINE A CREATURE INSIDE OF ME AND BESIDES I WAS GIVING HER FOOD, PROTECCION AND LOVE.
EVEN THOUGH I PASS OVER ALL CHANGES THAT LITTLE ANGEL IT¨S WITH ME AND I KEEP IT UP FOR HER HOW FINISHING MY CAREER SO THAT WAY I CAN GIVE TO HER A BETTER LIFE AND BE ALMOST A PERFECT MOTHER FOR HER.ASHLEIGH IS MY LIFE , MOTIVACION AND STRENGH.
THANKS AND HAVE A GOOD NIGHT
IRMALIS
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Hi! If a friendly creature visit me from another planet I would like teach him the beauty
Of our landscapes, rivers animals that inhabit our planet.
Other things I would like teach him how to live here on earth what we eat, our basic
Needs and everything we need to live for example
Water,food,clothing and we need good health.
Finally I show him the things made by human
Such as computers, cellphone , car and all the technology they have invented.
Adys
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